This is what I wanted to include in my appeal letter:
“Had I known that my failure to distinctly provide evidence of childhood toys and other childish nonsense would cause me to get low scores on the essay, I would have lied and made something up about how playing with Lego’s has made me want to be an engineer.”
Corinne made me take it out.
Corinne is a smart smart wife.
Thank goodness you have a smart wife!!